Wow, girl, your writing's so bold,
I feel every word, like a story retold.
But alas, with each line, my heart's cajoled,
Revisiting pains, in memories enrolled.
In your prose, emotions unfold,
Yet your talent shines, a treasure untold.

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Wow girl, your writings are so strong,
I feel every word, like a familiar song.
But, alas, with each line, I'm drawn along,
Revisiting pains, where I once belonged.
In your prose, my past echoes long,
Yet your talent shines, like the sun at dawn.

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The heat that you get by
burning other's house
won't be able to keep
you warm for too long.

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Few will love you,
You will love few.
But the few you love
Wouldn't always collide
With the few that love you.

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Finish it before you process it.
Initially I'd been following this strategy without even realizing it until someone pointed it out and asked me to stop.

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What are we,
If not liars?
Whispering lies to our own ears,
trying to convince ourselves into
believing that one day it'll all be fine.

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Eventually greys will turn into green.
With persistence & effort, success will be seen.

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It's night, but you haven't slept right ?
This grip of grief is oh so tight.
It blinds your sight.
Forbids you from seeing what's still bright.

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And now as the days begin to get warmer, I wonder why your heart is still so cold.

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Growth has no room for self-pity.

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